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Post by Rob W on Dec 3, 2014 15:25:10 GMT
So here is where we can vote and comment on this year's Christmas songs. As I've mentioned before, the 'Christmas Number One' will be revealed on Christmas Day and though I was tempted for it to coincide with when Top of the Pops was on in the 'old days' I've decided that the winner should awaken to the news so the Poll closes at 2am on Christmas morning. Have a good one.
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Post by eddiecustard on Dec 5, 2014 1:35:04 GMT
Did I count three songs which finish with the Jingle Bells theme?
For my song I just want to point out that that the title is actually You Make Me Shiver.
Colin Parish – Jingle Bloody Bells
Another intriguing mix of sounds: with crowd scenes, creepy low pitch choirs and squeaking. I like the bit at the very beginning with the tuneful intro and the kids playing, which lulls the listener into thinking that a pleasant jaunty song is to follow. Then the unholy sound of Jingle Bloody Bells comes in to shatter the mood. The harmonies are really good and it’s an impressive evocation of an overheated, undercooked family Christmas, where nobody really seems to be enjoying themselves. Felt like the moment of the evening when you really need someone to suggest going out for a walk for some fresh air. A strength is that you’ve juggled a multitude of effects, because the arrangement never feels overcrowded. In sentiment it couldn’t be much further from Mike’s Christmas Candle song. Good one.
Stephen Clarke – All I Want for Christmas is Some English Food.
A fine hymn to Quality Street, stuffing, plum duff and Chas and Dave. You clearly had a lot of fun making this, judging by the time you’ve taken putting together the lyrics and the spoken bits where some of the characters start chatting in the background. It wouldn’t work if you didn’t have funny lyrics, but you do, and my favourite was: ‘You can’t have Christmas cake while listening to the Queen/ We don’t do food no more, we only do cuisine’. Another good line is ‘I want beer from a barmaid in a Santa hat, not wine from a waiter in a silk cravat.’
It’s not much more than an acoustic guitar and a voice, but there are other interesting things going on such as someone shouting out ‘What?’ incredulously at the thought of the new menu, and later on ‘I’m going home’.
There are some impressive vocal gymnastics where you variously adopt the voices of cockney geezers, Auntie Mabel and Uncle Charlie. The social commentary reminds me of the tensions in my neighbourhood, where the gastropub crowd has driven away the seasoned working class drinkers at one pub, where their custom kept the boozer afloat for many years. Having said that, the new landlord does serve a nice confit de canard.
Tim and Glynn – Wishing on a Silver Lining
Terrific lilting tune that lifts the spirits. I like the brass sounds at the end of the verse, and the Motown feel. The chord change to the chorus is superb. Feels a bit Phil Spectorish. The harmony on the chorus bit of ‘stars are shining’ sounds great. You’ve pulled off the difficult feat of writing an upbeat, joyful Christmas song that doesn’t sound sentimental. In the verses the call and response of the lead vocal and backing singers is a highlight, especially the sections where the backers don’t repeat the lead vocal line.
There are occasional timing blips but it doesn’t matter – the buoyancy of the melody and the exuberance carry everything through. I loved it. A great end to your songwriting year – you’ve hit paydirt with this one.
Michael Gosling – Everybody’s Here.
A celebration of family and friendship, with warmth and a light humorous touch. I like the ‘save a seat for…’ section which tells us a bit about the mannerisms and quirks of the family members. Your talents for combining instruments and making them shine is evident throughout. The organ in the bridge works well to lift the song - something you’ve done successfully on a quite a few of your songs. I like the drumming which propels things along and gives it a breezy, yet urgent feel. Overall, it’s a bouncy tune with a lot of heart.
Michael Gosling – Christmas Candle.
Unusual in this collection in that it celebrates Christianity (I think) and the search for enlightenment. Again, the drumming works really well, complementing the instruments excellently. Nice harmonies and clicking (?). There’s a lot going here with a couple of guitars, a couple of keyboards and other bits and pieces and yet each is used so well – and sparingly – that it still seems full of space. A simple lyric but a good one, without any baggage or wasted words. Good singing as usual and occasional lead guitar interludes which include harmony playing, I think, in some parts. Very good.
Patrick Duffin – Johnny, Agnetha and Snow
Another good one – I like your theme of highlighting the way music ingrains itself in our heads over Christmas and remains vivid even many years after. You’re good at conjuring up a mood and you’ve done it well here with the opening piano and vocal which sounds rueful and yet also hopeful and celebratory. It’d be easy to revert to humbug when you’re landlocked in Stoke, so well done on remaining optimistic. It feels like a song to curl up by the fire to. Feels very atmospheric - you can smell the brandy snaps and leftover turkey. The bridge is superb, with the strings and a more energetic vocal combining very nicely.
Tim Warner – Christmas Millionaire
The trademark dark humour and insightful lyrics are in evidence again in bits referencing ‘home-made presents and recycled raffle prizes,’ and it’s a very effective moment when Joseph makes his request for money to a dad reluctant to part with cash. The structure is resolutely Warnerian – no chorus as such and a mix of the spoken word, half-singing and ‘normal’ singing. As usual there is a bit of lyrical ambiguity that enhances the song: early on I wasn’t sure whether dad had hit hard times this year in particular or whether he was generally very careful with money. Then the attention shifts to the son’s loss of innocence and what Christmas really means. It’s quite existential and I like that. Do you know The Go-Betweens? Your singing, delivery and style often remind me of Robert Forster’s songs for the band.
Like Patrick’s song there is a sense of melancholy, but also optimism. I like the melodies you bring in for the second half of the song and there’s some neat acoustic guitar playing – you should do more of that. It’s a good title too.
Phil Sanderson – Welcome to the Dawn
A cracking, haunting opening about the dark winter, deep snow and the ‘lost child’ wandering between consciousness and sleep.
It took me a few listens to realise that there is a chorus sung three times and I think that’s because the delivery of each one is quite different. It’s got rousing lines about a desire to ‘push the old year back against the wall and welcome the dawn’, and the middle one of the three choruses is the standout thanks to the close knitting of your singing with the harmony vocal. This section is brilliant. It’s a spiritual, almost like a church hymn. If you worked on polishing the singing elsewhere in the song and got it to this level throughout you’d have something majestic.
There’s some gorgeous guitar playing between 3.38 – 3.50 featuring two accoustics.
Lyrically, it feels like it’s about the day of the year with the most darkness (December 21st), and the knowledge that this is a turning point because there will be more light, and optimism from then on. It may relate to Christmas somehow, but I don’t really mind if it doesn’t – it’s this impenetrable nature of your stuff which is part of its appeal. Welcome to the Dawn is chock full of ideas. You’ve gone on another heady journey – well done.
Phil Sanderson - Santa Claus Has Got it Coming Funny, yet terrifying. You’ve gradually become the Master of the Macabre on this website, Phil – the Edgar Allan Poe of Pop. Danny Baker would probably describe this tune as a trip to the ‘rag and bone shop of the soul’. It’s the sort of Gothic horror that Papa Lazarou out of the League of Gentlemen might favour – three-legged greyhounds and all. The accordion (?) sound gives a spooky feeling, but it’s the Arabesque instrumentation that is the most harrowing. I’ve never heard a Christmas song with this kind of eastern influence, but good on you for throwing us the curve ball.
The sentiment here is very funny – a grown man seeking revenge on Father Christmas for bringing him substandard presents. ‘I get so cross when he brings me dross’ is an outstanding line.
My blood ran cold at the final scene at the foot of the chimney. Does Santa get what’s coming? I’m not sure. There’s a lot of high pitched wailing in the last few bars and I thought initially this was the last breath of a traumatised Santa who’s just been gutted like a fish by our hero. But then this character also sings the line ‘Santa’s got it coming’. Perhaps you just wanted to leave it up to our imagination as to whether Santa gets his comeuppance. A fascinating song – I’ve played it many times.
Phil Sanderson - (At Christmas Time) I’m Traveling Home This doesn’t sound like the same bloke who did Welcome to the Dawn. Like your other stuff it starts getting rewarding after two or three listens – I especially like the bassline on the verse. It combines really well with the drums.
I’m impressed that you did the a capella stuff at the beginning. It shows increased confidence and belief in your singing. Your singing sounds noticeably stronger on this one generally, particularly on the verse. Good stuff. The harmonies on the verse sound stylish.
It’s another curate’s egg of a tune that defies any categorisation. Well done on writing these three songs. I’m looking forward to your symphony.
Rob Warner – Christmas With Frandy ‘King’ Ellingcomo
Achieves the objective of sounding like a mix of Sinatra, Nat King Cole and the others thanks to some excellent mimicry. I’m sure I heard Michael Bublé in there somewhere as well. Beautiful singing, Rob. I like the voice and the walking double bass combination in the first verse. The introduction of each instrument gradually adds further pleasing layers – first the piano, then the trumpets/brass. The chords at the end of the chorus behind the words ‘magical Christmas times’ sound really good. Phil’s stuff is post-watershed so it’s good to see someone going for the family audience. I picture you singing this in a reindeer sweater, but your wonderful crooning and silky style should be popular with everyone, not just the housewives.
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Post by Colinallcars - couldn't log in on Dec 5, 2014 21:32:08 GMT
Stephen Clarke - All I Want For Christmas I Some english Food.
A cheery lament for some good old fashioned pubbery and grubbery. The spooky middle eight made me think of Scrooge being taken back to a dismal past. Love the BennyHillisms and ChasnDave-isms, the glorious Wenceslas Sproutery and the not-quite rhymes - chipolata- chiabatta: genius! Musically it’s all tight and deceptively simple. A great song, not a turkey, from a vegetarian songwriter.
Tim and Glyn - Wishing on a Silver Lining
Motown meets Bananarama. Love the brass riffs and the little drum fills. It has a seventies feel and could easily have been featured on Top of the Pops, all tinsel and flares. Nice lead and backing vocals. Middle eight adds a bit of tension, waiting to see where the song is going to go. This is a classic pop song with a universal theme. And a jingly bell ending - lovely!
Michael Gosling - Everybody’s Here
Nice straightforward lyric that paradoxically made me think of relatives who are no longer here…. This has a lovely poignant feel about it, gathering loved ones around the table, brilliant harmony’s on the ‘And everybody’s here for Christmas and New Year’ chorus. Redolent of lovely family Christmases of years gone by. Touch of Wizard - Roy Wood would be proud. And another jingle belly ending!
Michael Gosling - Christmas Candle
Very sweet song with lovely harmonies. I really like the drums and electric guitar. Again a great song for reminiscing about how it used to be (in my house too!) If this was on a Christmas album it would be the last track on side two, leaving the punters with a warm glow as they nod off in front of Morecambe and Wise repeats….
Patrick Duffin - Johnny Agnetha and Snow
This song is a lesson in the truism that less is more. The piano comes in like an Eagles song - Desperado? - lilting and laden with feeling: my what a sentimental bunch we are! When the strings come it - so classy - it adds so much emotion to the song. Love the way you come back to the original chord after the middle eight (…some bearded bloke…….And the house on the corner..). Beautiful singing from start to finish - and the most successful jingle bell ending of them all.
Tim Warner - Christmas Millionaire
It’s great the way you go from quirky off-beat to mainstream 4/4 - the song kind of creeps up on you. Reminded me of when I was young and my parents had no money but they tried to give us a good Christmas anyway. Slightly sinister start, with lovely rhymes - prizes/compromises. I absolutely love the innocence of the ‘Money’s no good at Christmas’ lyric because all the shops are shut. And the boy sees right through you - Ha! Nice chord progression, and I like the way the strings come in towards the end. Lovely idea that we’re all millionaires at Christmas. I’ll drink to that.
Eddie Custard - You Make Me Shiver
A touch of the Twin Peaks from the opening bass notes tells us this is going to be a bit of an unusual Christmas song - and so it is. The clown/santa axis of evil is laid bare in the child’s terror. Reveals the strangeness of parents telling kids it’s okay for a strange old man with white hair to come into their bedrooms at night….. is is Santa or Savile? Nice harmonies, and again less is more with just the piano and strings making most of the running. Love the up-running guitar solo towards the end. Unlikely to knock Cliff off the top spot any Christmas-time soon, but for good reasons.
Phil Sanderson - Welcome to the Dawn
Haunting. Guitar playing is exemplary - lovely sound from a 12-string. This song has a dreamy quality. The lyrics sound more pagan than Christian but I can imagine nodding off to it after the Christmas pud and the Queen. Your vocal, although a bit wayward at times, is always charming. Very unusual melody and the harmonies work well.
Santa’s Got it Coming
Santa Claus is coming to town - but unfortunately for him it’s the Fun Boy Three’s Ghost Town and he’d better watch out! Menacing lyric and scary delivery could frighten the kids! But I think it's Santa who should be scared because I think this kid might have a snooker ball in his stocking!!! Hope Santa’s wearing a helmet. Nice guitar solo, and I love the wailing banshee in the outro…. the bass keeps the whole thing together, with that typical guitar sound just flowing along like water - smooth.
(At Christmas Time) I’m Travelling
Starts off like a Christmas carol then a lovely driving rhythm dpushes the song forward. Sounds la bit like Caravan - anyone remember them? Nice harmonies, nice sentiment about going home to where we belong at Christmas, it’s what we all want.
Rob Warner - Christmas with Frandy et al (Remember this Wonderful Christmas Time)
Michael Buble meets Peter Gabriel - lovely crooning and a lovely toon! Sounds proper swing band-esque to me. I can see Robbie Williams singing this, all cheesy grin and sparking teeth, mugging to the crowds and counting the cash. It’s a complex song that sounds deceptively simple - a winner. If those brass licks had been played on real instruments you would have pulled off an absolute classic. Re-record it with the BBC Concert Orchestra and release it in time for next Christmas.
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Post by timwarner on Dec 7, 2014 22:57:11 GMT
Colin Parish - jingle bloody bells
Lovely busy guitar work, and then a Lindisfarne style harmony vocal, which is a nice juxtaposition to the lyrical content. I like the humour in the lyrics and can certainly identify with the role that I feel older blokes are pushed towards as they age. Catchy from the first hearing. I like the contrast in the break. I think you've done enough to prevent if from being a novelty Christmas song.
Seven Clark - All I want for Christmas is some English food
Very Chas and Dave. A good sing along chorus and some smart lyrics. It all bounces along nicely and, as usual, the backing vocals are well done. It feels more like a novelty song rather than a Christmas song (creeping into novelty song territory was always a strong possibility with this task).
TIm and Glyn - Wishing on a silver lining
This feels quite Motown to me. I like the melody in the chorus and I like the tambourine work. It's feels like a good natured party song. In the break it sound like the xylophone (may not be a xylophone but you know what I mean) player gets a bit lost but the rest of the players on the take that were so pleased they wouldn't redo it. It all helps it sound like a performance rather than something that was assembled on a computer, which has to be a good thing. Most of the songs here are about something specific but this one is different as its a more general 'let's have a party' type of song.
Mike Gosling - Everybody's here
Having had the general impression that most of the contributors here are a bit grumpy about Christmas, spending the big day at Mike's house would be a bit of a trial. This is very 'up' and gathers more power as it goes, getting slowly more raucous, a bit like a song by the Pogues. It's good song well played by Mike and Karl. Again!
Mike Gosling - Christmas Candle
A more thoughtful song here and definitely feels like a Christmas song. Great harmonies. The stand out part of this song, for me, is the guitar. I've always like the way you play and this is a great example.
Patrick Duffin - Johnny, Agnetha and snow
Great chords to open. The apparent simplicity of the presentation pushes you to listen to the lyrics (not something I do easily). The stings are wonderful, I was pretty pleased with the stings I'd added to 'Christmas millionaire' until I heard this. Nicely sentimental without getting really soppy. With a more gravely voice it could almost be a Tom Waits song, so keep smoking and drinking.
Me - Christmas millionaire
I was trying to disguise the beat of the song at the start by having the piano playing on alternative beats of a triplet. I like it when a song tries to hide where the beat is at a the start to keep the listener on their toes.
Eddie Custard - Shiver
Love, love, love this. Great melodies and playing. Possibly more important I strongly identify with this. My daughter was terrified of Father Christmas (and Mr blobby. The trip to the natural history museum to see the dinosaurs was a really bad mistake). It feels like it was made by the Beatles between Rubber Soul and Revolver. The guitar playing is absolutely top draw. Even George would have been impressed.
Phil Sanderson - welcome to the dawn
Well this feels pretty bleak. It could be that Phil is rebelling against the compulsory Christmas cheer that goes with his job. This is possibly the most hymn-like of the bunch, possibly because it sounds like it was recorded in a particularly big church. I sounds like it should be an intimate song but it loses that feeling with all that reverb (you probably know I don't use much myself, so you have to bear that in mind before you take it to heart). It really takes off when there is more dense vocals at the end.
Phil Sanderson - Santa's got it coming
Some of the songs so far have been ambivalent about Christmas. This one is positively hostile and all the better for it. Vocals much better on this and some great guitar work. Certainly the best of the three songs Phil submitted.
Phil Sanderson - (At Christmas Time) I’m Travelling Home
I like the 6/8 feel to this. Rhythmically the strongest of Phil's songs and uses the familiar theme of traveling home for Christmas. The vocal start is good but could have been executed a bit better (says me who resolutely refuses to sing properly). Then it goes into a bit that sounds like it came from the fourth Police album. I would have liked more change In the instrumentation for the different sections.
Rob Warner - Christmas with Frandy ‘King’ Ellingcomo (Remember this Wonderful Christmas time)
With so many shared Christmas history, it's no surprise that this pretty much hits the mark of what I imagine a Christmas song to be. When we were young and listening to mum and dad's records we all seemed to absorb the words without ever attaching any meaning to them, so the 'stream of consciousness' lyric works perfectly, it really doesn't matter that there is no story, to me at least. The only possible criticism is the band is a bit light and could have had another verse where the band really gets going. The singing is, as always, excellent.
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Post by patrickd on Dec 8, 2014 20:47:54 GMT
Patrick's thoughts on the 12 songs of Christmas
Well done everyone as usual, I enjoyed it. Merry Christmas
1 Colin Parish - Jingle Bloody Bells I like the introduction with the children's cheer, gives it a professional polish, witty lyrics with a catchy hook, I like the arrangements of the vocals, reminds me of (is it?) Keith Emerson's Christmas song with the 12 string. Wouldn't be out of place on Spitting Image, and the sort of Christmas song you'd love Paul Macartney to release as an antidote to his relentless cheerfulness. I liked it.
2 Stephen Clarke - All i want for Christmas Continuing the satirical theme, Clever lyrics, I can see it on the Two Ronnies, hopefully done by Rossi and Parfitt dressed as Santa. There is a genuine longing for the food which I can sympathise with, made me laugh. Again I liked the party atmosphere sounds. A lightness of touch which is very welcome.
3 Tim and Glynn - wishing on a Silver Lining Echoes of Diana Ross or Dusty on this one with the supremes backing vocals. I like the sparse Motown backing, there's a joy which comes across, I don't whether it was joyful to record but it sounds like it. Nice to hear the motown influence on your stuff.
4 Michael Gosling - Everybody's here Jolly feel to this one, glad you saved the drums for the second verse, they have a lot of impact, and raise the happy factor up. As always a thoughtful arrangement from Mike, he knows the rules well, and there's never any leftover turkey on his composer plate. The vocals are very well pitched on this one, not that they aren't usually on Mikes stuff. Nice one.
5 Christmas Candle I like the unusual rhythm, keeps the backing interesting and fluid. The verse sounds like a chorus which is always handy. I can hear this as just vocal and acoustic guitar for some reason. Lots of catchy stuff going on here.
7 Tim Warner - Christmas Millionaire Another Milliganesque epic from Tim, lots of great thoughtful lyrics, but lots of tasty stuff going on with the acoustic guitars, subtle effective strings too which complement the rhythm. Effective brush drum kit too. Drummers hate playing with brushes for some reason, I don't know why as I've always liked that sound. I love the kid's vocals too. There's a theme here of parents suffering in many of this month's songs, a mixture of pathos and humour. Clever stuff.
8 Eddie Custard - Shiver It is true - Santa Claus is coming to town is a creepy song - "he sees you when you're sleeping" This is creepy too, I can see it in a David Lynch film or as a cameo by a group of salvation army mutants in The League of Gentlemen. All this shouldn't detract from a very fine song, beautifully sung and well arranged, as with Mike, he knows which ingredients a song needs and there aren't any orange cremes left in his milk tray. Well done again Eddie.
9 - Phil Sanderson - Welcome to the dawn. I like the floaty, ambient atmosphere. I like the fact that the vocals dictate everything, no drums to cling to. I'm impressed by the way Phil sets his own rules with seemingly no reverence for traditional structures. This is maybe the closest he's got to a singalong chorus.
10 Welcome to the dawn - Santa's got it coming More scary anti-santa sentiments. Despite the sleighbells this is dark stuff, remember that Hammer Horror film Black Christmas when the murderer dressed as Santa. Some clever lyrics. Not one for the children.
11 - Phil Sanderson - I'm travelling home Imaginative acapella start and Indian rhythmns, Phil has pared down the melodies a bit here, and it reminds me of something George might have wanted on Revolver, there's an eastern influence on the melody as well as the instrumentation.
12 Rob Warner - Remember this wonderful Christmastime Sweet vocal delivery revealing his jazzy side, I like the big band instruments, and that feel you've gone for. I like the rambling stream of Christmas consciousness aspect, it's an unexpected ingredient to the christmas feast, slightly unsettling as it's nostalgic with a hint of mania underneath. It's unusual that you have a christmas song about not remembering stuff, as they're usually about dwelling on how wonderful the past is. (mine was anyhow).
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Post by mikegosling on Dec 9, 2014 13:33:21 GMT
A good variety of Christmas songs ranging from party music to some Grumpy Old Men singalongs. If these 12 songs were put out on an album I don't think it would quite reach the musical heights of Phil Spector's Christmas album but it might be a truer reflection of how grumpy we can get at Christmastime.
Colin Parish - Jingle Bloody Bells: The grumpiness starts here; the children's hoorays misled us. The music bounces along on some nice acoustic guitar figures and some catchy "not much" backing vocals, but the lyrics tell the real story. Colin is not really enjoying his Christmas (although perhaps the fact that "everyone's ignoring" him is a good thing - a chance to read some of that book he got for Christmas). Musically, I like the change to the other section of music, but thought that the electric guitar part could be a bit more Slade-like? 9 out of 10 for grumpiness.
Stephen Clarke - English Food: Have Chas and Dave never done a Christmas song? - they've missed a trick if they haven't. This is a good idea for an alternative Christmas song and the Chas/Dave treatment is a perfect fit. If Spitting Image were still running this would be on their Christmas special (but not shown on Christmas Day - which now seems to be restricted to showing Call The Midwife and Downton Abbey - oops some of your grumpiness is rubbing off on me). Another 9 out of 10 for grumpiness.
Tim and Glynn - Silver Lining: Oh yes, Phil Spector hasn't been sidelined entirely. The Supremes / Motown groove is very effective. Although Glynn's voice isn't quite Diana Ross, together with the backing vocals and instruments this works very well. As it's a bit of a party song the lyrics got rather lost on me, but I'm pretty sure there was a notable absence of grumpiness. On a structural point, I think the song could have ended at the 2:15 mark. I didn't think the instrumental part was really necessary. Glockenspiel was nice though. Sorry, 0 out of 10 for grumpiness.
Patrick Duffin - Johnny, Agnetha and Snow: Lovely vocals, piano, strings - but in particular the vocal is delivered superbly. The sleigh bell entrance is a bit of a surprise, then it settles into a nice rhythm. The lyric, being based on nostalgic memories of youth, has a slightly wistful, melancholic feel to it which I like a lot. It celebrates Christmas memories, but not with a party hat on. Being a little older than Patrick, my youthful Christmas memories are more Slade and Wizzard rather than Abba, but the lyrical theme of the song is a good one. And not really any grumpiness - 0 out of 10, I'm afraid.
Tim Warner - Christmas Millionaire: A really well constructed song, in particular the lyrical theme and the use of Joseph to bookend the song with "can't we just ask for money" and the line about spending it on Boxing Day. The chorus of "Everyone's a millionaire" is excellent as well - again the sentiment is well executed. My comments are all about the lyrics and not the music this time around - I think this means you got the Christmas message across very successfully. The grumpiness (which is more a kind of weariness or disillusionment) early on is eradicated as the song develops, so only 3 out of 10 for grumpiness.
Eddie Custard - You Make Me Shiver: A very good melody and set of chords for this Christmas song. Eddie demonstrates again his ability to create a fluid melodic line. I particularly like the hook "You make me shiver" - it works very well. An interesting angle on the usual Santa Claus is coming lyrical theme. I really like the guitar at the end - I think this is the musical highlight for me. I might need to go back and check for grumpiness - I think we were too scared to be grumpy - so, 0 out of 10 on the grump scale.
Phil Sanderson - Welcome the Dawn: A very good atmospheric beginning, the use of the 12 string guitar creates a dark brooding sound which the lyric and vocal delivery complement. As with Phil's songs in previous months, the listener (well this one in particular) has to work hard to appreciate the song. Maybe I listen to too much pop music these days, but I definitely find myself drifting off (thought-wise) and hence, I always need to give Phil's songs a good few listens before getting them. A bit too dark, but not necessarily grumpy (1 out of 10 for grumpiness)
Phil Sanderson - Santa's Got It coming: Well, this was a bit different - it sounds like the Clash with Joe Strummer doing one of his more hysterical vocals. The mad bit of vocal at 2:00 is great. The rhythm and instrumentation with its kind of middle eastern vibe is very enjoyable - This is definitely my favourite of Phil's 3 entries. The grumpiness has turned into outright hostility - 7 out of 10 for grumpiness / 10 out of 10 for hostility.
Phil Sanderson - I'm Travelling Home: and Phil rounds off his trilogy with what sounds, initially, like a traditional carol from the 14th century. The different approaches to the Christmas song idea in Phil's songs are very impressive. I like the electric guitar coming in later on to support the vocal - that works well. Not sure there was any grumpiness (so, 0 out of 10 for grumpiness)
Rob Warner - Christmastime: Sorry Rob couldn't remember the whole title - that might just be the longest Christmas Song Title Ever. Well, it certainly does exactly what it said on the tin. This song is a very faithful treatment of the classic Christmas croon - a bit of Frank / Andy, and also from more recent times a lot of Michael Buble. The piano, walking bass, jazzy snare are all great. The brass also sounds great, but I'm not sure the brass runs are in the right places. Rather than using the brass in a call / response manner with the lead vocal, you have the brass line at the same time as the lead vocal - not sure that quite worked for me. Your vocal, as usual, is fantastic - the lyrics are all over the place, which actually makes it a bit more interesting to me. And you can't remember whether you had anything to be grumpy about - so, 0 out of 10 for grumpiness.
Hope you all have a great Christmas (and that you don't get too grumpy).
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Post by tandg on Dec 14, 2014 19:32:12 GMT
Colin Parish - Jingle Bloody Bells Really interesting how you managed to take quite a simple idea but get so much variation into it. I liked the children cheering that makes such a good counter to the despondency of the lyrics, the changing instruments, with the ‘grandpa snoring’ distorted guitar. The vocal sound variations between verse and chorus and the harmonies throughout make for quite a busy arrangement but it all fits and you can hear everything. That’s quite an achievement. What really makes the song is that when it’s in full flow the arrangement sounds like a full on Christmas song and that contrasts so well with the lyrics. I particularly liked the fact that you sang the word xmas a couple of times – it seemed to sum up the desperation of the singer as they tried not to use the ‘C’ word. Really good fun, great harmonies and a catchy tune. Thoroughly enjoyable.
Stephen Clarke – All I Want for Christmas is Some English Food We both loved this. The lyrics are brilliant – some of the rhymes are inspired (as commented by Eddie) and we sat and really laughed. I liked the simple arrangement and the harmonies & background chat is great. What’s really interesting is that this is definitely not a style of music that I would choose to listen to but in the context of the Collective, I thoroughly enjoyed it. What’s going on? Maybe I’ll learn to love crooning!
Mike Gosling – Everybody’s Here Probably the most ‘feelgood’ song of the month, which is just as well for a Christmas song in my book. We liked wistful element to the lyrics – the balance with the happier element was just perfect. The music is at it’s best when in full flight and I really liked the drum track (particularly the cymbal hits towards the end for some reason).
Mike Gosling – Christmas Candle Not sure why this sounds quite 80s in feel – I guess it’s about the guitar part - it has a sort of Police feel to the introduction in particular. I liked the little guitar bursts (personally I would have liked to hear a bit more of that). I think this was the only song to deal with the religious significance of Christmas which was quite brave. I think I ‘got’ Everybody’s Here more than this one.
Patrick Duffin – Johnny Agnetha and Snow I wasn’t sure about this until the burst of strings came in and then I couldn’t stop listening; waiting for it to be repeated and then the break in the middle - the choice of notes for the strings is just wonderful: unpredictable, effective and perfectly placed in the mix. I then started noticing how well you sang it. It can be quite hard to stay so perfectly in tune and modulate the voice that well when you sing quietly. This is so beautifully done.
Tim Warner – Christmas Millionaire To me this sounds almost conversational – not really like a song, more a laid back commentary set to music. As with many of your songs, this feels like you really thought about it and are willing to experiment, which is just brilliant. You haven’t fallen into a specific groove and the structure, instrumentation, subject and style all seem to develop as you go along. I suspect you may find next month’s song structure easier than some of us will. I really liked the acoustic guitar in particular and the mixing was really good – quite a bit of space to spare.
Eddie Custard – You Make Me Shiver This felt quite dark (until I heard Phil’s song) and I’ll think differently about Santa from now on. As always, your vocal line and the harmonies that support it are wonderful. I remember commenting on how you managed to get angst into a funny song about a horse and here it’s even more evident, in a song where angst feels entirely appropriate. I like the sparseness of it all – the piano is lovely but the occasional chords on echo guitar is really effective and for me lifts it up another notch..
Phil Sanderson – Welcome to the Dawn Really interesting song and arrangement. It sort of drifts around with fascinating odd notes and sounds, echos and modulation against a background of 12 string guitar and eventually, it seeps in that this has a structure and is rather lovely. The gentle vocals sound almost confessional in places and I really liked the unison singing in the chorus.
Phil Sanderson – Santa’s got it Coming There’s something very ‘Stranglers’ about the main riff and the sense of threat in the vocal delivery. I loved the solo - it really fits and is terrifically played and the voice has bit of John Cale about it, especially immediately after the solo. This could be a real alternative/cult Christmas hit. I can’t wait to see the video.
Phil Sanderson – (At Christmas Time) I’m Travelling Home Like so many songs by Phil, this rewards a few listenings. I almost always don’t quite get your songs on first listening because structurally they don’t always follow a conventional pattern and you build a very thick sound, to which the 12 string is an integral part. It creates a sort of wall of sound that doesn’t immediately grab me but every one of your songs has hidden depths and that’s particularly true of this one. I love a capella opening, the feel of the rhythm track and the chorus line eventually sinks in and I found myself humming it for hours. Really interesting.
Rob Warner - Christmas with Frandy ‘King’ Ellingcomo (Remember this Wonderful Christmas time) This is really cleverly put together. It comes across that you know and love the crooning style, which you’ve reproduced to a tee. Nicely recorded and really well sung – I would personally have loved it if it had taken off at the end of one of the drum rolls. I loved the brass sound and great key changes work beautifully. I could just imagine the live performance to go with it –immaculate cut of suit (but probably a half undone bow tie) and ultra-smooth movements and sudden turns towards the camera/audience. The Rat Pack were never really part of my musical upbringing and I’m not a fan of Mr Buble but this convinces me I could be converted.
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Post by stephen on Dec 14, 2014 21:55:14 GMT
A great selection - we should have Christmas more often. As Mike says, lots of grumpiness, but mostly it was fun grumpiness. And anyway one of the best Christmas Carols is "In the Bleak Midwinter" which isn't exactly "Jingle Bells".
Colin Parish Jingle Bloody Bells
Yes, I can just imagine the school choirs singing this one. Excellent harmonizing, and there are some deceptively festive melodies in there. It's like that Greg Lake Christmas song, but converted to satanism. Very brave lyrics – I would never dare to use a line about not being romantic with the wife any more, well, not till the divorce anyway, for use in court. Great use of Garageband's sounds – you must have an improved version compared to mine : )
Tim & Glyn Wishing on a Silver Lining
A return to when I was a kid, certainly, and Motown was king (not that I was aware of it at the time). Especially nice chords for the "Christmas lights reflecting in the rain" section, a real Diana Ross chorus. The piano and xylophone (?) break sounds just a little dark at first, but there's nothing wrong with that. I like the "Jingle Bells" sign off, but you just cost yourself a zillion in royalties…
Mike Gosling Everybody's Here
Zero grumpiness here. A great rock band feel, loud and proud. I like the way the jangly guitar kicks in and the song takes off into full-on party mood. Very effective a cappella (nearly) break with the drumsticks. It captures the Slade spirit, which is a big compliment in my book. And if you need someone to service your central heating I can recommend a reliable address.
Mike Gosling Christmas Candle
Great hook, nice chugging guitar in the background, very effective drumming, and the chords change at exactly the right moment to take us into the chorus, which ends in a surprising minor section. Refreshing to hear a bit of shameless White Christmas-style sincerity for once - it's harder to do than taking the pee. They'll be singing this one at nativity plays everywhere (though they'll have to be flame-free candles of course, for safety reasons).
Patrick Duffin Johnny Agnetha and Snow
That third chord in the intro gives it away – this is going to be a "morning after" song, clearing up the wrapping paper after everyone's opened their presents, laughed at their novelty socks, broken their toys, and gone home. Beautifully played and sung, as you always do. It's a highly effective and (to me) perfectly melancholic conjuring up of the spirit of Christmas past. The antidote to Slade. Pass the whisky.
Tim Warner Christmas Millionaire
John and Yoko have nothing on this. It's like a short film, a sort of slow-motion stroll through the madness of Christmas shopping, showing how pointless it all is. Nice hook line, too, a sudden outbreak of more conventional songwriting: "we're all millionaires at Christmas". I definitely should have listened to this before going Christmas shopping.
Eddie Custard Shiver
Tim Burton's Christmas. Could just as easily be about God (except for the hat and gloves of course). The ¾ rhythm (if that's what it is) matches the theme perfectly. Excellent piano playing throughout, jingling us along through Santa's grotty grotto. Great chords on "you make me shiver inside", and very effective harmonies on the bridge. And as usual a great guitar break. A Custard classic.
Phil Sanderson Welcome to the Dawn Very wintry feel, a sort of pagan hymn, like a photo of a snowy forest. I like the echoey guitar that comes in just before the first choral section, which works really well too. And then the even more echoey guitar solo fits the mood perfectly, as does the 12-string strumming as the song ends. A surprisingly Christmassy song because it really captures the chill of mid-winter.
Phil Sanderson Santa's Got It Coming
You and Eddie Custard need to hook up and make sure Santa never bothers us ever again. This is a sort of Clash Christmas song, with its Joe Strummer-ish hook putting the boot in to the man in red. Even the falsetto at the end feels like it could be from the Clash's Sandinista period. Or the Specials – the hook reminds me a bit of "Ghost Town", with the same gloomy predictions. Very nice bass playing, effective guitar solo, and those sleigh bells are gloriously ironic.
Rob Warner Christmas with …
Even if it's meant to be a spoof, it works really well as a straight Michael Bublé Christmas special. Great old-time big-band feel, all those little touches like the brass and the drum fills are probably meant to be ironic, but they work, and when you talk about "magical Christmas times" it rings completely true. All you needed to do was go out with a big major flourish on the last vocal line and it would have been 100% celebration. The most Christmassy song of the lot.
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Karl
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Post by Karl on Dec 16, 2014 17:49:10 GMT
01 Colin Parish - Jingle Bloody Bells
I like the guitar sound and the playing sounds great, and the children voice sample is obviously very appropriate - but I used the very same sample on a corporate video for the company I work for about 5 years ago, so can only think of it each time it appears in the song! Very catchy right from the first listen, but having heard it a few times now, I think there is probably 1 chorus too many.
02 Seven Clark - All I Want For Christmas Is Some English food
A good candidate for UKIP's Xmas song - but considerably cleverer than any of their policies!
03 Tim & Glyn - Wishing On A Silver Lining
Surprisingly the only stab at a Phil Spectre / Motown inspired pop song. Really well put together and does sound really "Christmassy" (horrible term, I know) to my ears. Highlights for me are the piano parts, the subtle build-up solo, the brass sounds, the introduction of the glockenspiel towards the end (although not the jingle bells outro) and, as ever, Glyn's voice. PS - You could have deleted the 48 secs of nothing at the end though!
04 Mike Gosling - Everybody's Here
Had a lot fun playing drums, tambourine and sleigh bells on this one.
05 Mike Gosling - Christmas Candle
I heard the original ideas and demos for this one, and love the way it finally turned out. Not as Goslingesque as usual, probably due to the programmed drum parts, but those guitars sound just great. Good song.
06 Patrick Duffin - Johnny, Agnetha & Snow
Fantastic singing - so controlled in such an exposed arrangement, which is as excellent as I would expect from Patrick. Some might argue it's a bit mournful for a Christmas song, but it has a lovely sense of melancholia - and probably the best jingle bells outro of this batch.
07 Tim & Julie - Christmas Millionaire
As experimental as ever, the odd timing for the intro almost clashing with the really nice brushed drum part (Patrick - I like brushes!) and then there's Tim's individual vocal delivery which works so well here. I also really like the keyboard / strings part, especially when it hits that chord at 35 secs and 1.05 secs - marvellous! The understated use of the little boys voice is well judged too - I especially like the prologue!
08 Eddie Custard - You Make Me Shiver
Very well executed, and the delivery of the vocals is good too. I think it might have more irony if it sounded a bit more "Christmassy", but I expect that was intentional. I also like that twangy guitar riff that comes in towards the end.
09 Phil Sanderson - Welcome To The Dawn
Very wintery, very medieval, and, when the harmonies eventually come in at the end, a little bit "Christmassy" too.
10 Phil Sanderson - Santa's Got It Coming
The unusual instrumentation and great bass line (part and sound) certainly make this dark and convey the feel of the lyrics.
11 Phil Sanderson - (At Christmas Time) I’m Travelling Home
Nice instrumentation again, and that ancient feel to it that's a bit of a Phil trademark.
12 Rob Warner - Christmas With Frandy ‘King’ Ellingcomo (Remember This Wonderful Christmas Time)
What a change of style from anything that has gone before in this set of songs. Rob must feel he has achieved exactly what he set out to do. Well sung, well constructed, just needed a bigger end (no sniggering please Rob!). Damn, now I've got to vote!
Merry Christmas SWC. I'm looking forward to hearing 2015's offerings.
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Post by philsanderson on Dec 20, 2014 0:11:20 GMT
Colin Parish - Jingle Bloody Bells Love the sentiment –it’s not blasphemous in my book, just brutally honest. Like other reviewers I enjoyed the stark contrast between children’s cheers and the main vocal. Good arrangement, just wish there were more ‘bottom end’ ( maybe it’s the result of MP3 – have had mp3 issues with some of my songs ) Deserves a cracking good video.
Stephen Clarke - All I Want For Christmas is Some English Food. Another song which I can immediately imagine with a video. Brilliant ‘effortless’ lyrics and terrific vocal delivery. The backing vocals are fantastic throughout, together with the different voices. I won’t be able to look at a Xmas menu again without thinking of this song. ( although, like you I don’t eat meat- I’m actually a Vegan) Does Auntie get her stuffing....oo er..
Tim and Glyn - Wishing on a Silver Lining Lovely upbeat, positive song. It’s a rare event for me to like any joyful Xmas song, but you have certainly achieved with this one. Your vocal has definite echoes of Barbara Gaskin ( + Dave Stewart ) on this song. ( = good for me!! ) Enjoyed the keyboard / brass parts too!
Michael Gosling - Everybody’s Here Wonderful arrangement and production from first note to last. Another upbeat song for me to really like. Maybe my grumpy views on Xmas have been altered at last – my family will be indebted to you, Mike! This song has me singing along every time now, foot tapping, playing along. ... Great!
Michael Gosling - Christmas Candle Favourite ‘rhythm’ this month, and terrific chord / surprise at end of chorus. I can see myself wanting to use this in school next Christmas (official permission request!). It’s sort of 80s but at the same time very ‘now’. Enviable vocal performance – I can only aspire. Like the string sound again – has inspired me to work harder on mine for December! Patrick Duffin - Johnny Agnetha and Snow Sentimental!?? ‘Landlocked in Stoke’ could become a euphemism and may even make it into the next rewrite of the OED! Very effective strings used, and liked surprising entrance of sleigh bells. Another faultless vocal delivery. ( and another faultless instrument delivery, too! )
Tim Warner - Christmas Millionaire Impressive ‘surreal’ opening to song ( both lyric and music) The piano part is my favourite part of song after a few listening – sort of hypnotic and I hope you somehow incorporate this section into another song with a wild guitar solo over the top! I almost feel like we have entered a daydream for this song – like the singer manages to sort out his views on Xmas as the day progresses. Excellent ‘backing’ vocal contribution!
Eddie Custard - You Make Me Shiver
Disturbing. Makes you reflect about the whole Santa thing and how we seem to celebrate a fictional character who spies on us to see if we’ve been naughty... Big Brother is watching you ( on CCTV?) The mood of the music matches perfectly to the lyrics – dark and scared. I’m glad that you avoided making this Christmassy sounding. It reflects ( quite justified ) fear. During the past two weeks I’ve been accompanying multiple classes of children singing ‘Santa Claus is coming to Town’. I’m now never going to play it again - EVER. I’d love to get away with playing ‘You make me shiver’ but I might get called into the head’s office ( she, like Santa, seems to know what we’re all doing ) Twin Peaks guitar playing a highlight.
Rob Warner - Christmas with Frandy King Ellingcomo(Remember this Wonderful Christmas Time) Ah yes, Christmas is finally here..... Seemingly effortless vocal crooning over a wonderful bass line. I have a mental picture of a home for the more elderly with a rather forgetful patient / resident half in pyjamas and half in evening suit serenading the assembled home with the orderlies in the background checking his meds and making comments about how quickly his recall of the past is diminishing. That was a long sentence, I can’t even remember the beginning... I know you wanted to get the big band on this. I can sort of imagine the song without the big band, too - not a criticism, just a thought !!
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Post by Rob W on Dec 20, 2014 14:32:29 GMT
Colin Parish - Jingle Bloody Bells This is quite Lindisfarne! (Actually, having researched it a bit more, I may mean ‘Mike Oldfield’!) The start is perfect and just radiates Christmas. I like the way the vocal at the beginning has been ‘radio-fied’ and then becomes clearer when the main vocals start in the verse. The children are a nice touch. There are some really nice musical moments here. I was about to write that there could have been a bit more ‘light and shade’ and then everything dropped out at the right moment. The lyrics are great and read well even before one has listened to the song and Colin’s delivery suits the song very well. It’s not ‘I Believe in Father Christmas’ but sits perfectly in the annals of Christmas ditties! Similar Christmas Song? ‘In Dulce Jubilo’
End of term report: ‘Though Colin joined us very late in the year, he has muscled his way into contention very quickly. Keep plugging away and enjoy what you’re doing as much as we all enjoy listening.’
Stephen Clarke - All I Want for Christmas… I loved this for its inventiveness. I’m thinking of how to convey what Christmas means to me and you’re Mr Outraged down the pub - brilliant! The lyrics are delivered with just a hint of Gerry Rafferty (I always say that) and the highest compliment I can pay you is that everything just rolls along without effort. Similar Christmas song? Mel (Smith) & Kim
End of term : ‘Stephen has had an excellent year. Keep up the good work!’
Tim & Glyn - Wishing on a Silver Lining I really liked the Spencer Davis drum feel. I was worried that it would become a little wearing with the same rhythm throughout but the song really lifted itself when we launched into the Chorus which was lovely. I liked the ‘call and answer’ motif throughout (it was very much like a choir.) When it went into the Chorus, it had a feel of Bananarama (that’s a compliment!) particularly with the harmony vocal. Similar Christmas Song? ‘200 Miles’ by the Pretenders.
End of term report: Tim and Glyn (I’ve finally started spelling her name correctly!) have been consistant performers throughout and haven’t yet produced poor or shoddy work. Two brains are better than one and their shared victory in the polls in September was well deserved.
Mike Gosling - Everybody’s here This starts off like a Stephen Clarke song (a real compliment!) This is typical Mikey G in that it sounds so simple and yet is clearly a complex collection of movements. I love this for its energy, I love it for Mike’s vocal and the melody choice. This song grows and grows and is a real anthem to the joys of Christmas. Brilliant effort, Mike. Similar Christmas Song? The Pogues and Kirsty McCall
Mike Gosling - Christmas Candle As Mike mentioned, this has an eighties feel to it but it’s quite well buried under his excellent production. I love the melody and the sentiment of the lyric is matched very well to the treatment of the music. The vocal ‘wall of sound’ is fantastically executed. It’s hard to call whether this is the better of Mike’s two songs as they’re both so strong. Sound like? Driving Home for Christmas
End of term report: Mike was the one who inspired me to begin our little ‘collective’ and has shown us the way throughout the year. His recordings are (sonically) close to perfection and his instrument choice and melodies are usually on the money. Keep up this unbelievably high standard, young man!
Patrick Duffin - Jonny, Agnetha and Snow It’s what we’ve come to expect from ‘The Duff’. He is a master of this writing and recording lark and he has an extra card up his sleeve by constantly evolving and surprising. The sounds he chooses are weighted perfectly and his lyrics paint a vivid picture of Christmas. Highly polished and not too sugary! I loved it. I worried slightly about his voice, though, as I know he has several gigs coming up. Keep gargling the aspirin. Christmas soundalike? When a Child is Born
End of Term report: Patrick arrived at our club with a long and distinguished history as both a songwriter and a musician and he hasn’t failed to live up to his billing! He continues to lead the way in both his recording, musicianship and songwriting. How many more times can he top the Songwriters’ Collective Polls, one wonders?
Tim & Julie Warner - Christmas Millionaire This had quite an unsettling start but grew and grew and the lyrics (and sentiment) were really well thought out. I laughed out loud when, having laid out the arguments as to why we’re all Millionaires at Christmas, the young boy’s voice says ‘we can spend it on Boxing Day’. That’s just the sort of annoying logic that children will quickly adopt when faced with a potential barrier to their wants and desires. This song has really surprised me. If I’d just dismissed it after the first 20 seconds, I’d have missed what may be my favourite song/sentiment/message of the songs listened to thus far. Really well done. Christmas soundalike? Merry Christmas (War is Over)
End of Term Report: If one were to return to April 2014 and listen to the T&J song, one would be forgiven for thinking that they had stumbled into some parallel universe. I cannot remember how I reviewed their first song but I remember not being overly impressed. Since then, this dynamic duo have climbed steadily and their progress has been based on inner belief but more importantly, taking notice of the constructive advice that has been offered and their steady progress culminated in a request to use their poll-winning song on another website. Keep doing what you’re doing and be true to yourselves. I’m a proud brother/brother-in-law.
Eddie Custard - Shiver The last three months-worth of songs from Eddie have been ridiculously sublime. From his slick backing vocals to his perfectly pitched melody lines to his engaging lyrics. Lyrically, this was very good though some of the phrasing (unlike all of Eddie’s previous songs) seemed a little forced. I really enjoyed the simplicity of the backing (no drums and clean guitar sound) but my only real criticism is that it didn’t sound all that Christmasy! I know that’s not a crime especially given the content of some of the other songs on offer but I didn’t particularly marry the words with the mood of the music. I feel harsh saying that because I’m a huge fan of ‘The Custard’. Sounds like? Ryan Adams’ ‘Hey Parker, It’s Christmas’.
End of Term Report: Eddie was almost there at the inception of SWC and has just got better and better since he joined culminating in two victories (one shared). He is the complete package of to-die-for melodic sensibilities and stop-and-think/laugh-out-loud lyrical abilities. There are so many ‘best improvers’ but Eddie is now playing in the Premiership with an already impressive catalogue of songs.
Phil Sanderson - Welcome to the Dawn The first of three. Phil was very insistent on the order that these were placed. It’s a very dream-like start with Phil’s voice drowning in reverb. This definitely has a Lindisfarne feel to it. Phil told me that he’d been struggling with a cold/sore throat but I actually think it’s helped the mood of the song. It immediately has a dawn feel to it and I got more and more out of this after the second or third listening. Phil has definitely thrown off the shackles of conventionality in the last few months and this feels as though he’s been freed of restrictions so will have 8 bars of beautiful guitar playing. I really loved the build of the vocals. All it needed was some jingle bells (or tuned church bells) and this would have definitely felt 100% Christmasy (though I don’t think you’ll be invited onto the Johnny Mathis Christmas Special anytime soon! Sounds like? An unchristmasy number one - Mad World!
Phil Sanderson - Santa’s Got It Coming I was looking forward to this one just from the title. The drum sound is great at the beginning and I absolutely Phil’s vocal performance is perfect. It reminds me of an old musical acquaintance of mine. it’s easy to just listen to the lyric and vocal but that would be doing the backing a disservice. I knew Phil could play (his ‘shredding’ has been in evidence before) but he’s decided to turn his guitar up in the mix and Whoah!! Fantastic. There’s also a really interesting, quirky bass lind going on. I love the sudden un-reverbed vocal (nice production idea) and the weird falsetto voice. I loved this from the off but a second listen is fantastic. This is probably one of my favourite Phil songs of the year. Well done (and be sure to plunge those burning fingers into an ice bucket!) Sounds Like? If John McLaughlin made a Christmas album, this would be the single.
Phil Sanderson - Travelling Home A Phil S opening choir sounds great and believable. When the instrumentation starts it reminds of the mid 80s and I can imagine the opening musical bars from a Phil Collins album track. Phil loves his weird and ever-changing time signatures. I often wonder whether he sets out to create alternating bars of different bar lengths or whether he writes the lyrics and then writes the music to fit regardless of the uneven lengths. Again, this deserves a second listen. The hook line is really catchy. All three of Phil’s songs have absolutely hit the Christmas nail on the head, for me (in other words, they have a Christmasy feel.) Sounds like? A souped up/nuclear powered Gregorian Chant
End of Term Report: I remember Phil and I being out for a spring time run and telling him about my idea for the ‘Collective. He immediately threw himself into it with much enthusiasm (I think the first month he had twelve different songs for the ‘Song Name’ challenge to choose from.) I think Phil would agree that he’s unlikely to win a Brit award for vocal performance but he could definitely win one for originality. As I have already mentioned, the past two months have seen Phil unshackled and producing music that (I hope) he is proud of rather than trying to fit his ill-fitting ‘brick’ into a conventional musical wall. My offer still and always stands that if he feels that he wants to use a guest vocalist (as he did in August) I am more than willing to be his bitch!
Rob Warner - This wonderful Christmastime (or whatever it’s called.) I’ve been frankly staggered by kind comments thus far. I honestly considered withdrawing it right up to the last minute because I assumed I’d be laughed out of town. As I mentioned in my notes (I think) this was a homage to all those crooners (whom I still absolutely adore) who were the icing on my Christmas cake, the wrapping on my presents and the star at the top of our tree. It’s also a homage to my mum and dad, my brothers and sisters and my wife and children who have always and continue to make Christmas my favourite time of year.
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Post by Rob W on Dec 25, 2014 23:39:06 GMT
Congrats to Patrick and Eddie. A joint Christmas Number One. It's as if Slade and Wizard were competing in 1973 all over again (except that Slade won that year!)
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Post by Colin Steward on Dec 26, 2014 16:27:12 GMT
I got here too late to vote unfortunately. Nevertheless, my votes wouldn't have altered the situation to any earth shattering degree. I'm not keen on Christmas but started recording and ran out of time and imagination, topped off with the annual Christmas man-flu. My top songs here were (in no particular order) Colin P's (my wife's favourite), Patrick's, Eddie's, Tim's and Rob's, and depending on my mood my favourite changed daily. I've missed a few months now but hope to get back in the swing soon. Well done to all, especially any who managed to to suspend their cynicism for a month; it's a tough call.
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Post by timwarner on Dec 27, 2014 14:07:02 GMT
Well done to Patrick and Eddie. Two really good songs and I'm feeling a bit smug because I voted for them both.
I've really enjoyed being part of the SWC this year and have learned much from all the comments and from everyone else's approach to a given task. Thanks for listening.
The only thing that troubles me slightly (writing this down makes it seem a bigger concern than it really is) is that we're mainly blokes of a certain age, writing songs for blokes of a certain age. It would be nice if we could get some more input from someone outside this profile.
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Post by Karl on Dec 28, 2014 11:32:12 GMT
Well done Patrick. Well done Eddie. A good end to a good first year.
I'm looking forward to hearing (and in a small way) helping with the challenges for next year. This forum has been a real success - well done and thank you to Rob for all the hard work.
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Post by mikegosling on Dec 28, 2014 12:07:07 GMT
Congratulations to Eddie and Patrick - I enjoyed both songs.
My thanks also to Rob for putting the Collective together - it has been great to be part of it this year.
Happy New Year to you all.
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Post by colinallcars on Dec 28, 2014 22:08:51 GMT
A very worthy top three - well done guys. Merry Cristmas all.
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Post by eddiecustard on Dec 29, 2014 14:29:34 GMT
Have a good 2015 everyone. Cheers for making the Collective so enjoyable. Special thanks to Rob for setting it up and running everything.
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