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Post by Rob W on Oct 15, 2017 19:56:44 GMT
Two votes for a very select few!
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Post by Rob W on Oct 22, 2017 17:58:28 GMT
Tim & Julie Very rich sounding as if T&J get a new add-on to their recording set up on month-by-month basis.
This sounds very together as if it’s a band!!
I loved the stops and starts and the Robert Fripp-sounding lead twiddles.
In terms of lyrical thought (and as you alluded to in the sleeve notes) this is a subject matter that has been covered…and covered and covered. Tweeting seems to be an obsession for some and the criticism of tweeting, though not an obsession, can be equally as tiresome so I sort of ‘zoned out’ once I understood the thrust of the lyric.
On a technical note (and it has to be understood that I’m listening to this on Beats’ Headphones) there’s an awful lot of middle in the overall EQ. The guitar (unsurprisingly) was perfect in terms of its sound and the execution of the parts but the bass for some reason seemed to occupy some of that space too (though it was undoubtedly bass-y!)
Overall, a great effort, demonstrating growth and maturity as well as stamping your unique style all over it.
Phil S
I love the thought that you’re secretly a cross-dresser, Phil!! I feel that I know you’re not as you even suggested that running ‘tights’ were a bit weird.
The story is great as Julian discovers his inner Juliet.
This ‘celtic’ song has a beautiful and bouncy happiness to it and I can imagine this being a Christmas number one to the outrage of people who demand ‘proper’ songs at Christmas.
I loved your now trademark guitar ‘shred’ but I could have done with that a bit louder. Overall, I was relieved that I could hear every syllable as the lyrics were delicious and not a little surprising in places as you teased with the idea of Julian’s secret.
Brilliant.
Stephen C
He always gives us a tune and a hook.
Even when he’s out on his travels, he makes the effort to contribute and this is as good as anything he’s written.
Stephen, unlike me, has a sound that is uniquely his - unpretentious and accessible, I was intrigued by his dour interpretation that ‘…change is getting further away’ while I’ve gone for the (perhaps) easier to defend sentiment that change is happening all the time and is inevitable. But I would guess this is more a call to alms for the disaffected, all wrapped in an easy to digest, catchy tune (Stephen is the master of the catchy tune.)
A wonderful effort again and another ‘stallion’ from the Clarke stable.
Christian D
From the off, a weird chord inviting in the audience and then a move down and back into comfortable and familiar territory as Christian romps along in his characteristic style that always belies the complexity of his instrumentation and arrangement.
Unlike most of the songs I ever listen to, the lyrics always draw one in and this song is no exception. I love the story telling and I was intrigued to find out whether he’d be discovered or just continue along on his road of infidelity (in fact I was watching the ‘bar’ showing me that I only had 45seconds to discover the final FINAL outcome - the only disappointment of the song, for me, was the kind of lack of real conclusion. We’d found out he’d been kicked out by his wife for his affair but I felt sure that from Christian’s vivid ramblings there’d be an additional sting in the tail. This is a minor gripe as the lyrical content was utterly enthralling and charming.)
Musically, this is as good as it gets. He’s an accomplished musician and his drum programming is the of the same high standard as his bro (and I) used to do and just edges it up the pecking order.
A great song, brilliantly put together (and sounding, sonically, better than ever. New gear, perchance?)
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Post by timwarner on Oct 24, 2017 12:42:02 GMT
Changed To Newspeak - Me
Possibly a bit too short but, as I couldn’t think of more lyrics, it’s probably for the best. Perhaps I should have borrowed some of Stephen.
Juliet - Phil Sanderson
The overall sound is like the Pogues backing on the on that bit in ‘The Departed’ where the baddies are going off to do some terrible deed. The freaky guitar is back but, over the accordion, it seems to work very well. Smart lyrics, that I’m not sure if I find funny or sad. It’s a rip-roaring romp.
Change Is Getting Further Away - Stephen Clarke
The change of recording venue does nothing to diminish the cleverness of the lyrics and the easy melody on this. We seem to be talking about a similar topic, except you do it better. Much better. This is dark and you seem to attack just about everybody: no side from any debate escapes unscathed from this. Great stuff.
Change is Going to Come - Rob Warner
As always, production and vocal delivery is superb. I really love the squishy bass. The chorus is one of those ‘telephone in the air’ moments (formerly 'lighter in the air' moments) for the next festival you play. I know lyrics are always a challenge and, some of these are not great. Because the chorus ends with ’til they day you die’ it feels less uplifting that it should. The song is good and certainly worth saving for a reworking for the next Another Citizen gig. In it’s current form, it’s probably a filler for the next album.
First Lie of the Day - Christian Duffin
The start of this is almost Prog! It trots along quite nicely and occasionally get flashes of the prog beginnings but I also get flashes of Squeeze and The Kinks. The story is a wonderful exploration of the thrills and consequences of playing away from home. Having recently watched Doctor Foster, I think you may have understated the down-side.
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Post by eddiecustard on Oct 25, 2017 22:28:13 GMT
Stephen Clarke – Change is Getting Further Away
Despite your comments about low production values the sound quality is surprisingly good – the echo has disappeared, and the instruments have greater clarity. Notably, there is no echo on the guitar that fills in for your bass.
This is a really good song, and highlights the strength of your songwriting at a time you don’t have much technology at your disposal. It’s a well-constructed folk song and sounds simple – but it isn’t easy to come up with these. I like the Holy Grail/whale line and the lyrics in the second half of the chorus sum up the premise of the song in lilting lines: ‘I’ve been marching at the front of the line/I’ve been repeating every slogan they say/an illusion, my conclusion is that change is getting further away.’
Another winner.
Phil Sanderson – Juliet
More confessions from Phil along the lines of his recent thong thing. This is a loveable jig about a bloke who’s curious to find out what it’s like going out on the town as a woman. Phil displays a light comic touch here. It all feels very jolly and playful, although the thought of seeing him with a ‘double E’ bust is slightly eye-watering. The protagonist has clearly spent a lot of time making himself look convincing; I like the imagery in the lines ‘wax my legs, use perfume/pretty smells fill my room’ and in ‘change my voice into falsetto, perched upon my new stilettos.’ Phil doesn’t reveal whether Juliet has a successful night – or what might constitute a successful night – but this is a bouncy, energetic song thanks to the jaunty drums and the snatches of accordion. I’m really enjoying Phil’s Gaelic phase – and this will take some beating. Good stuff.
Tim and Julie - Changed to Newspeak
Some inventive guitar playing from Tim here – it’s good that you’re experimenting with the discordant stuff. I feel a bit mean-spirited saying that this is a slight dip from your recent outstanding form, but I couldn’t find much to hang onto during the song as a whole – sorry T&J. That might be because you’ve spoiled us with some great rhythms and melodies lately and I’m judging you a bit harshly. The bass works well, sounding a little like free form jazz at times. The mix is really good.
Rob Warner – Welcome Back
Startlingly good given that you cobbled it all together in such a short time. The chorus is restrained and yet carries a certain oomph and the uncluttered arrangement punctuated with harmonies and some nice Pino Palladino-style bass sounds is very enjoyable. There are one or two clunky lyrics but there’s good piano playing, great singing and a soulful groove. It’s one of your very best ballads though. Voting will be difficult this month.
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Post by stephen on Oct 26, 2017 11:05:25 GMT
T&J Changed to Newspeak Brilliant guitar playing, I'd love to be able to play a fluid lead/rhythm line like that. Very good drums too, again, wish I could do the same. Some neat lyrics, especially when you drag out the vowels "overuuuused/intervieeeews"), and the "newspeak" theme is dead on. I think you could have turned up the harmonies a bit on those three beats at the end of the vocal lines - it would have given you an even stronger hook. Shame it's so short, I hoped you were building up to a searing guitar solo. Great blues, though, the three-piece sound is very clean and gives real space to the guitar.
Phil S Juliet Great fun, as mischievous as usual musically (especially the oompah ending), and even more bonkers than ever lyrically. It's as close as "commercial" as you've got since your electro phase, with that great hook, "Julian is Juliet". Using different voices works really well, and some of the lyrics are excellent (falsetto/stiletto), comic as well as comprehending (hiding it from the workmates and the wife). Like T&J's, shame it's so short, I started to think, given the music, he/she was going to a ceilidh, the wig would fall off, into slow mournful bridge, then end on a triumphant chorus "hell, it was fun" sort of thing. But that's just me being interfering. Great stuff.
Rob W Change is Going to Come I really don't know how you manage to knock out a song like that from zero in a matter of minutes. It's a bit more conventional than usual, musically, but that doesn't matter. The start is Eltony, but then you make it your own. Great vocals, as usual. I enjoyed the fretless bass, and the new guitar sounds like value for money. Very effective, the way you lead into the guitar solo, which is really melodic, and then it builds excellently at the end with the choral section, giving the song a real structure. Impressive.
Christian D The First Lie Excellent three-minute pop song, reminds me in parts of "Downtown", though overall it's the "Penny Lane"/"She's Leaving Home" of adultery. Your usual jangly guitar works really well, especially the mix between power chords and arpeggios. Great chunky bass line, very McCartney. The piano solo comes as a surprise, but changes the mood well, and leads into the finale. The vocals sound even clearer than usual, higher in the mix, and it makes the story more immediate. The details of the narrative are really good - checking his messages, "beer/coast is clear", replying to the wife's text (that's what made me think of Penny Lane she she's Leaving Home, picking out the details). A winner.
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Post by philsanderson on Oct 28, 2017 9:38:56 GMT
Tim and Julie – Changed to Newspeak
Love that guitar sound, in fact I love all the notes / chords you’re playing, too – what overdrive / distortion do you use, Tim? I’d have liked another verse or verse with a guitar solo, but no matter, I just play song twice through each time! It’s a great driving song, driven along by a good bass line and crisp drums. I like the sentiment behind the lyrics and the words are delivered well, including very effective backing vocals. Great!
Stephen Clarke – Change is Getting Further Away
Another classic SC song with lyrics to envy from first word to last. Somehow you can rhyme words which might sound crass, but they never do in your songs ( eg ‘share’ and ‘yeah’ !) Really really like the guitar sound on the left side and the higher guitar part on the chorus on the right side ( if that makes sense?) The last chorus and the outro are just lovely. I can imagine a great video for this mixing up footage from different eras.
Rob Warner – Change is Going to Come
What a great piano sound on the intro. It made me immediately set up my keyboard to try to emulate it, with rather less success than I had hoped. When coupled with the bass sound and trademark first class vocals, you have produced a fine piece of music indeed. Some of the lyrics are a bit clichy, but that’s a bit picky from me I feel. Backing vocals lovely again like previous month’s song. I like how there is only a short section after the guitar solo, it’s well balanced and ends the song on a thoughtful note ( if rather sombre, as you bring death to the listener’s attention!)
Christian Duffin – First Lie of the Day
Great opening to this song… and then it just gets better and better. Another song where I can’t decide whether I like the verse, prechorus or chorus most – they’re all good – hang on I forgot to mention the instrumental bit, also first class. This song has got stuck in my head for a week now, although I never seem to be able to remember the lyrics, so I return to play it over again. Love playing along to this song, but I don’t think I could add to its excellence.
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Post by timwarner on Oct 29, 2017 22:38:59 GMT
Congratulations to Phil and Christian. The two most enjoyable and appealing songs this month. I couldn't split them.
Christian, as far as being 'mean-spirited,' not a bit of it. I keenly read all comments, the unfavourable comments are probably more valuable.
Phil, the guitar sound was a Strat with the neck pick-up, into Line6 versions of: a noise-gate, Tube screamer (drive turned down), into a Fender Bassman (Drive 6, bass 10, mid 8, treble 8, presence 3, volume 9.5) into a Green back 4x12 recorded using an SM57 into a studio compressor and, finally, a Slap Plate reverb. It's pretty much a SRV style sound.
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Post by Rob W on Oct 31, 2017 7:10:40 GMT
Congratulations to Phil and Christian, well-deserved winners.
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